I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, December 16, 2021
Friday, October 22, 2021
Wednesday, September 29, 2021
Tuesday, September 14, 2021
Onomatopoeia
We have been looking at ways to add impact to our narratives. We found that onomatopoeia enhances our stories.
Tuesday, August 17, 2021
Friday, July 9, 2021
Friday, June 18, 2021
How to make a hot chocolate
Friday, May 28, 2021
Language Features and similes
We have been learning about some language features .
We have been learing to use language features in our wirting. Here are some features we have been learing about.
Person mom
Six similes
She is kind like an angel
I like my mom as the way she is
My mum is a very
My mom is great cook like a chef
My mom is kind and caring like a nurse
I love my mum she is the best in the world
Riroriro Quiz
In wirting We have been learing about riroriro quiz in I would like you to watch it enjoy
Friday, May 21, 2021
the viking village
I went on a boat and crashed on rock and woke up in Viking village on the the side of the mountain.
While I was walking i could see old rotten woods made into houses I could also see wobbly roads with a unsturdy briged .
There was burning smoke on the side there was torches on the side with skulls on them
I can hear kids playing with barrels and laughing .
I could smell yummy food already made .
There was dragons on top of houses and swords and shields
Their were shiny knives, the villagers were sharpening them, and washing at the river.
The vikikng village was a busy place.
Friday, April 16, 2021
Friday, April 9, 2021
Thursday, March 25, 2021
Zeinab the present
Last week I was playing Call of Duty on my Ipad with Suvali. She is my BFF. Suvali and I play Call of Duty every Friday night at my house
Then my mum came in and had a big box in her hands and I said what could be in the box? I said to open the box, I opened it and in the box was a puppy with three legs. I felt sorry for it. Then I said no I don’t like this puppy. I threw it away on the floor then I kept on playing Call of Duty. The puppy found a red ball and it threw the ball to me with it’s mouth. but I threw it back and I went back on Call of Duty.
I tried to ignore it, but the puppy was so cute. The puppy threw the ball back then I looked at the puppy and maybe It should be enough of playing Call of Duty, and I should get some fresh air.
I started to like the puppy and I fell in love with it. I said to Suvali we should go outside. It's enough then Suvali said ok.
I said to my Mum we were going outside to take the puppy outside with the puppy. She said ok then we went out and had a good time and a good fresh air. The end
Tuesday, March 23, 2021
fun run
Today was the fun run. I ran with Suvali. I got wet in the fun run by the teachers . There were some
water guns and a bouncy castle.
Duffy Theater Writing
On Monday we went to The Duffy Theatre and it was called Duffy’s Bubble Trouble.
The characters were Duffy, Scruffy, MooMoo Molly, Chickens, including Bess.
Firstly they sang the Duffy song and they also danced as well.
Secondly, Duffy went to Facetime to talk with his Teacher. It was reading, and Duffy loved reading. When Duffy was on facetime Scruffy was on snapchat. Duffy was getting distracted
by Scruffy so he went in Scruffy's room and he said
“Why are you on snapchat? You have to be online to zoom.”
But Scruffy said “I don't want to, it's so boring.” Then she said” fine I will go now .”
Then Duffy went back online he said ``I'm sorry” But when Duffy got back the Teacher was on mute. Duffy turned off his iPad and he said “I hate online zoom. It's boring”
Next he heard something at the door . He opened the door and he saw his book had arrived and got so happy. Then he went to auntie and he said that I got my new books . Scruffy came down and said “Oh no I need to hand sanitiser it” and when Duffy came back he saw that Scruffy was hand sanitising his new book and he said “Scruffy why did you hand sanitiser?” Then he got mad because Scruffy doesn't like germs and she kept on hand sanitising everything and washing her hands a lot
Duffy went for a walk to calm down. He fell in a giant hole and saw Moa bones. Bess, the chicken was in there too. He yelled for help and Scruffy heard him and she said “I’m sorry,you are right.” Scruffy went to get auntie to help and they got the rope to help get him out.
And He said I’m Free “ and he gave scruffy a big huag “ and Duffy said i’m sorry too scruffy “
Duffy said i’m sorry for yelling at you and being mad at you.
They went back home and changed the earth around for the other side. Then Scruffy for the ipads away in the pig water then Duffy got mad again then auntie gave the phone to Duffy then Duffy said Hello and mum said kia ore she said what's the matter Duffy said that Scruffy put the ipad’s away in the pig water . Duffy mum said if you work for auntie and earn Money i will buy it ,
Duffy said ok bye, after a while Duffy was looking all around the to look for Scruffy in scruffy was in her room crying then Duffy said why you crying , because you tellend mum you why i tell mum what i no i wasn't allowed to do that, i’m sorry that i do that it’s ok scruffy we can be best friends .
The show was good and it was funny and long