Last week I was playing Call of Duty on my Ipad with Suvali. She is my BFF. Suvali and I play Call of Duty every Friday night at my house
Then my mum came in and had a big box in her hands and I said what could be in the box? I said to open the box, I opened it and in the box was a puppy with three legs. I felt sorry for it. Then I said no I don’t like this puppy. I threw it away on the floor then I kept on playing Call of Duty. The puppy found a red ball and it threw the ball to me with it’s mouth. but I threw it back and I went back on Call of Duty.
I tried to ignore it, but the puppy was so cute. The puppy threw the ball back then I looked at the puppy and maybe It should be enough of playing Call of Duty, and I should get some fresh air.
I started to like the puppy and I fell in love with it. I said to Suvali we should go outside. It's enough then Suvali said ok.
I said to my Mum we were going outside to take the puppy outside with the puppy. She said ok then we went out and had a good time and a good fresh air. The end
A nice piece of writing. Very well done. You have all the ideas in order and have made it interesting. Well done describing how you felt too. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteHello Zeinab.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that the puppy and you were friends in the end.It couldn't of been easy for the puppy to be in a new environment.
Have you got a name for the puppy?.
Hi Zeinab awesome work i like that you put the face on top
ReplyDeletehi suvali thank you for repying me back
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