we have been learning to write recounts in the style of a newpaper reporter.
Friday, April 16, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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SUPER Zeinab.
ReplyDeleteYou've used speech marks in the right place and punctuation.Your story was well set out and very easy to read.
You've included some great words to make your story POP!.
I like that you told us the problem and how the problem was solved.
What have you been doing over the holidays?.
I have spent a lot of time gardening.
hi Mrs Cassidy thank you for reading my story in the hoildays i went shopping and going to the park
ReplyDeleteHello Zeinab.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have looked at your blog tonight.
Hello Zeinab nice work I like it you added a lot of deitail but maybe do a little bit more stuff into it . :)
ReplyDeleteHello Zeinab.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.